A One Million Monkeys snippet.

Okay so if you don't know what One Million Monkeys is I'll tell you. It's a writing site where one person starts a story and other people add to it. Now this is a snippet I wrote for a "choose your own adventure story" Tell me how you like it and feel free to continue it in the comments if you feel like it. (I'll have a link to the site at the bottom of the post.)
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You're walking to you're friend's house for a 'surprise' birthday party. She had said it was just a sleepover but you had known it was a surprise party for weeks.

It's about 6:00pm so it's about a half hour till sunset. It's in the beginning of fall so the whether is just starting to get cold. A gust of wind blows and you shiver despite the thick jacket with the words 'I'm me; get use to it!' on the back. You where never sure exactly what it meant--just some self empowering thing--but the jacket it's self was good and warm.

It's about twelve blocks from your house to your friends, but there is a short cut...but it also happens to go though most of the creepier ally ways in town.

You already had a track meet today and your feet are killing you. You really don't want to walk twelve blocks right now.

So do you?
a) take the short cut.
b) suck it up and walk the twelve blocks.
c) screw the hole thing and ask you're friend to come to your house.

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The site Here and the original snippet Here