A monologue from "Vampretina"

Okay so this is the first big monologue I've written for a play so tell me what you think! I don't really know what background you might need on this so if you find it confusing just ask me! Oh except that Titus just called her deranged.
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ELIZABETH
I am not deranged! And just because I don't want to be a killer doesn't mean I'm not a descent vampire ether. I mean--in theory of cores--if you're looking at it from the prey's perspective vampires are the least bad thing to be eaten by because--besides insects and small birds--vampires are really one of the only living--or semi-living--thing that has the ability to feed without killing. And I don't just mean killing animals, you have to kill plants to eat them too.
The only reason most humans don't think like this is because the vampires that do kill make themselves more widely known. Not to mention that as history has shown that it is the vary worst of a grope that becomes the stereotype for them all. And what dose it do? It only brings hate, it is what has started every war in one form or another. If only it was the good and kind ones that represented the gropes? Then what wold the world be like? If people simply remembered the good and not the bad then maybe, just maybe, we could all live in peace. All humans and all vampires, living side by side in peace. This is my true dream.

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I wrote this in just a matter of minutes because these really are my views and I was relieved to finally have a character who could pull them off!

Another song! "Which One?"

So this basically is saying that even though these two vampires are technically at least 1000 years old they still have the same mind set as two teen girls(they look around 17-19). Here they're at a night club choosing what guy to eat...yum?

"Which One?"

ELIZABETH: Which one? Which one? Which one shall I chose to eat?
JOSY: Which one? Which one? Which one will be a tasty treat?
BOTH: Which one? Which one?
ELIZABETH: (spoken) Maybe that guy over there?
JOSY: (spoken) Oh girl, you can do so much better than that.
BOTH: Which one? Which one, shall we eat tonight?
ELIZABETH: Which one? Which one? Which one will be filled with spice?
JOSY: Which one? Which one? Which one will be really nice?
BOTH: Which one? Which one?
JOSY: (spoken) What about that guy in the corner?
ELIZABETH: (spoken) (scoffs) That guy's so high he'll only taste like smoke.
BOTH: Which one? Which one, shall we eat tonight?
ELIZABETH: Which one? Which one? Which one will have yummy blood?
JOSY: Which one? Which one? Which one won't taste like mud?
BOTH: Which one? Which one?
ELIZABETH: (spoken) What about that guy on the dance floor?
JOSY: (spoken) Girl, that guy's got more B.O. the everyone else here combined!
BOTH: Which one? Which one shall we eat tonight?
ELIZABETH: Which one? Which one? Which one is a one-man fest?
JOSY: Which one? Which one? Which one will pass the test?
BOTH: Which one? Which one?
ELIZABETH: (spoken)What about that guy at the bar?
JOSY: (spoken) You know that guy's way too old to be clubbing.
ELIZABETH: (spoken) So are we.
BOTH: (laughs) Which one? Which one, shall we eat tonight? Which one? Which one, shall we eat tonight?

Song from my new musical "Vampretina"

So here is a song from my new musical about vampires. In this song Elizabeth (the mane character) and Titus (her shier) are fighting about her wanting to be human again.

"What's So Wrong?"
ELIZABETH: What's so wrong, about wanting something more?
What's so wrong, about feeling alone?
What's so wrong, about wanting life anew?
TITUS: I'll tell you what's wrong! It's that you're not them!
ELIZABETH: What's so wrong, about wanting a friendly face?
What's so wrong, about wanting to love?
What's so wrong, about lifting your head to laugh?
TITUS: I'll tell you what's wrong! It's that you're not them!
ELIZABETH: What's so wrong, about breathing the dawn's sweet air?
What's so wrong, about felling the breeze?
What's so wrong, about wanting the sun's sweet light?
TITUS: I'll tell you what's wrong! It's that you're not them!
ELIZABETH: And what's so wrong about the flowers?
And what's so wrong about the trees?
And what's so wrong about the blue bird's song?
TITUS: I'll tell you what's wrong! 'cause that's for humans, not you!

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So that was my first song that I both wrote and composed! How you all like it!